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Disassembly of Reason ([personal profile] disassembly_rsn) wrote in [personal profile] felineferal 2010-08-22 07:02 am (UTC)

"Every time Anderson opened his mouth whole streets got dumber." :)

"Nothing of interest. Flatmate has the attention span of a child. JW" Very good exchange there. :)

Some minor nitpicks (yes, I'm the type of person who liked the opening of The Great Game):
  • "risen and eyebrow" should be "raised an eyebrow"

  • "He was far to use to Sherlock’s actions" should have "used" rather than "use"

  • "Donavon" should be "Donovan"

  • "loose sight of" should be "lose sight of"


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